ian. your last post could possibly evolve into an extension of the musician portion of my theme.

let me grab your ears
and stear you brothers and sisters
to our spot over here

we got words flowin forth
tryin to set your minds on the course
to recognize the tension
and unsettling force

looming everyday gaining power in any way
getting us all to turn our heads,
lock our lips
and shrink away

peace to you. peace to them
let's bring on the Peace Zen

listen for a moment
to put some action after "then"

there could be a dance (and a corresponding song) where you are center stage on a stool with an acoustic guitar. you are in the process of writing this song. in bits and pieces it evolves into something you are happy with. and in the middle perhaps there could be a break of frustration... or an interjection of your monologue's sentiments.

what you think?